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6 steps from midnight by ~ascelin:iconascelin:



Six steps away from midnight
All we have now is luck
And love for the things that are
And will be
Five paces from the witching hour
And it's you
With me
Smiling hand in hand
Four steps away from light
And the hope of a new promised day
Of Zion and the back country of deep embraces
Three paces away from life
Full fledged and young
Strong in heart
And limb
Ready to take flight and soar
Two steps away and I can feel your voice
And hear your breath
Hope sighs in anticipation
One foot away
My anticipation fills my lungs
As joy wells from inside bursting from it's darkened well
A phoenix ablaze in the sky for all to see
And a few to envy
Midnight
A new day dawns as the future is birthed
Alive
Healthy and with all it's fingers and toes
To stretch forth and claim what is it's birthright
Love
And you in my arms
Resting in the room in my heart
Dancing with our souls entwined
But for now it's six steps away from midnight
Anxious smiles
And the future awaits
©2009 ~ascelin
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Author's Comments

No comment. Just something that was stream of consciousness.
Good or bad it had to be born. Here it is.

This is actually the sister poem..or oldest child, of another piece I wrote many years ago. i may post it as well.

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:iconkin-inu:
wow this is powerful. very well written it was interesting to read.

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"There is no one who does not carry scars on their heart. If there was someone like that, he would be a shallow soul." - Hiei, Yu Yu Hakusho
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I'm an AuFox here me howl!!!!

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:iconascelin:
Thank you. It's not something I tend to write.
It started bouncing around my skull last night an begged to come alive.

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"'Tis better to die for being different then to live as a sheep"-Anon.
:iconkin-inu:
You are very welcome. i have a few poems like that to. once the idea starts bouncing i can't get rid of it till i write it out.

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"There is no one who does not carry scars on their heart. If there was someone like that, he would be a shallow soul." - Hiei, Yu Yu Hakusho
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I'm an AuFox here me howl!!!!

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Yes. I've had so many bouts of insomnia because of those pesky things.=)

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"'Tis better to die for being different then to live as a sheep"-Anon.
:iconkin-inu:
hm well i havent gotten insomnia over those pesky things yet....just the desire to listen to a song over and over and over and over and over again till the idea gets fully formed and on paper (i listened to a song 100+ times straigh in a week trying to get the idea formed...how my roommate didnt kill my laptop i will never know)

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"There is no one who does not carry scars on their heart. If there was someone like that, he would be a shallow soul." - Hiei, Yu Yu Hakusho
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I'm an AuFox here me howl!!!!

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:iconascelin:
Ear buds!
I do the same thing at times.

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"'Tis better to die for being different then to live as a sheep"-Anon.
:iconkin-inu:
ha ha ya ear buds are useful most of the time though i would have it playing on my laptop and i would be sitting on my bed with my scribbler open trying to put words to paper and she would be sitting at her laptop with her ear buds watching something..........................................

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"There is no one who does not carry scars on their heart. If there was someone like that, he would be a shallow soul." - Hiei, Yu Yu Hakusho
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I'm an AuFox here me howl!!!!

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